Which is the most important thing for a country leader to assure the prosperity of country：
1. Create more jobs for employed worker;
2. Increasing agriculture and low the food price;
3. Increase access to affordable house
A good country leader creating more jobs
To be a great lead for a country, in my perspective, who are supposed to create more jobs for employed worker. Because of the increasing mechanization of industry, there would be less and less work positions for human.
First of all, only if the citizen of the country can find a suitable job, they would live a nomal and happy life without be afraid of no food for his/her family. Of course the society will be safe and stable enough to go forward and develope sustaniablely. There are many countries in the world where is unstable to live and to grow, which mostly result from the unpleasant employment environment. In these coumtry, young man who can not work in a company idle on the street and even don't behave themselves, so it's common to see kidnap accident and theft affair there.
what's more, providing a position for young people works better than directly help them with the goverment subside. They will be more appriciate the former action. A house of his/herself would be promisingly possible if they had a well-paied job. Naturally, they will also devoted themselves to contribute to his/her company and country, the GDP of country will be rising rapidly for every one occupying a position. Until all of them making a living themselves, the country will be stable, the devopement of coutry wil be sustainable. China chairman has anounced such policies 5 years ago and the effect is obviously amazing. And owning to those policies the chairman is more popular around the country. Those graduates who enjoyed those policies and found job in the empolyment market turn out to be condiderablely industrous.
In addition, it is indeed difficult for the company to hire more employees if they just don't need. So it's turn to the leader to regulate the markert competition, to encough companies not to only focus on the profit and money but to contribute more positions for young peoples especially those who graduated lately from schools and colledges. The leader should also enhance the travle industry which is field requirs numerous graduates.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'of course', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225388601036 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.142487046632 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0880829015544 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0725388601036 0.046263068375 157% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0388601036269 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0984455958549 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0284974093264 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70754717558 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0414507772021 0.0309702414327 134% => OK
Particles: 0.00259067357513 0.00188951952338 137% => OK
Determiners: 0.111398963731 0.0887237588012 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284974093264 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0181347150259 0.0139019557991 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2110.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 354.0 408.028673835 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9604519774 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358757062147 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265536723164 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186440677966 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11581920904 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70754717558 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 65.39091455 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8235294118 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9196129357 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.117647059 120.699889404 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.644075263715 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 47.3772017281 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.38775510204 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495063956746 0.300154397459 165% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120910007432 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759148839372 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542007961346 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165230622161 0.151897553556 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192132679294 0.114077575197 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845402246424 0.0781384742642 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.316838454375 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.132064446222 0.067059652881 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319379150648 0.210909579961 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650382774627 0.0618886996521 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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