There is growing demand of freshwater in these days. what do you might be the reason behind? how can we overcome it?
Nature has blessed us with abandon of natural resources. Water is a precious natural resource the earth. At present, a huge demands of fresh water is increasing day by day because of many reasons. Here,I would like to account for Causes and some possible solutions to reduce that kind of issue.
There are multifarious point to show the lackness of water on the earth. First and foremost, using the large amount of water in factories and industries for manufacturing products and throwing garbage into the clean water of river,which leads to shortage of clean water. Hence, many of people face problem regarding water. Moreover, increasing the massive number of population contribute usages of water rapidly.Therefore women have to face problem while doing domestic works. Along with this most of the people are unaware about the problem of water they use clean water for unnecessary work such as a car washing, cloth washing and so on.
On the other side,some point can help to reduce the issue of clean water. initially government can impose some rules and regulations on company and factories to promote the clean water. In addition to this controlling the increase number of population can help to reduce the uses of clean water in domestic area. Apart from this, spreading awareness about the current issue clean water among the people must be lead to promote the savings of water for future generation.
To recapitulate, water is the necessity of everyone's life. one cannot survive without water so government and individual should share joint responsibility to overcome this hazard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: demand
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...day by day because of many reasons. Here,I would like to account for Causes and s...
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...ctories and industries for manufacturing products and throwing garbage into the c...
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Suggestion: , which
...ng garbage into the clean water of river,which leads to shortage of clean water. Hence...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...tion contribute usages of water rapidly.Therefore women have to face problem while doing ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287197231834 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.128027681661 0.155533422707 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103806228374 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0311418685121 0.0501214627716 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0103806228374 0.0437548338989 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.148788927336 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0346020761246 0.0403226058552 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72043276665 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0415224913495 0.0326793684256 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0968858131488 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0242214532872 0.021408717616 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00346020761246 0.011925033212 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1600.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15384615385 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365384615385 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265384615385 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180769230769 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123076923077 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72043276665 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 56.9591021695 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3333333333 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4662756581 49.517814964 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.8717948718 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.77551020408 1.69124875643 164% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165542297441 0.332605444948 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123487817626 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0675208177059 0.0668466124924 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.590725866171 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128667728352 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822437489724 0.134430193775 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397234859481 0.0742795772207 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.410741544079 0.324371583561 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112323410725 0.0638462369009 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117248890778 0.228012699653 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265421438734 0.058150111329 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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