To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In asserting that to understand the importance characteristics of a society, one has to study its major cities, speaker failed to acknowledge other diverse issues related to the topic- characteristics which are related to history and tradition- Beside the characteristics of a community which follow the idea of the speaker, culture and people. Nevertheless, I agree with the statement to the extent that “only” people and culture of the society are considered, in other cases as will be elucidated in the points below, it will not be so.
Due to the ambiguous nature of the Topic “To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities”, I will assume the clause is related to history, tradition, culture and the people of the society, which are the four most important foundation of a society. Admittedly, when talking about people and culture of a society, major cities play a significant importance in displaying its characteristics. Take for instance, Tehran, the capital of Iran, has the most population amongst other cities in the country. As a result, more budget is provided by the government to sustain and express the community’s culture and people. “Talar Vahadat” or Vahdat Hall is the most cultural complex one could find, In Tehran. Dating back to 50 years ago, the hall represents not only a rich culture of Persian community but also our people’s attitude and way of thinking.
With these example, it could be argued that studying major cities to find out about a community’s characteristic is valid, but when viewed holistically, it is not because the history and the traditions of a community are well preserved nowhere but the small towns. I can remember an experience of mine, when I went to Shaft, Guilan, for taking some picture of the landmarks and the nature there. Heights of Shaft, broaden my horizons not only by its beauty and tranquility but also by the way people greeted me with hospitality. As soon as they saw me, a stranger, they welcomed and invited me to their house. I had the chance to get to know their way of living, tradition and the history of the region. It is by all means of paramount importance to mention that these characteristics of a society, are only hidden in the deep parts of a small town, like Shaft. Unfathomable history is only achievable throughout areas alike, where the places are untamed still. Notwithstanding, people might want to undermine this assertion by saying that such thinking applies to only certain countries and societies which are not mechanized and technology-inflicted. However, just like I said earlier, I will maintain my stand that only cultural and characteristics related to people can be studied in major cities.
In conclusion, contrary to the claim above, I agree with the statement mentioned to the extent that the characteristics are limited to people and culture, other characteristics of a society like history and tradition are ought to be sought in small cities and towns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to be sought in small cities and towns.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'talking about', 'as a result', 'by the way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242320819113 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.134812286689 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0648464163823 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0580204778157 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0443686006826 0.0444667217837 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10409556314 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0409556313993 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.24671587916 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0409556313993 0.030933414821 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00170648464164 0.0016655270985 102% => OK
Determiners: 0.100682593857 0.0997080785238 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0170648464164 0.0249443105267 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0153583617747 0.0148568991511 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3059.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 500.0 452.878318584 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.118 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138 0.132149295362 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24671587916 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 219.290929204 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 53.6273039579 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.7777777778 23.380412469 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.734189267 59.4972553346 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.944444444 141.124799967 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 23.380412469 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.674092028746 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 56.3777777778 51.4728631049 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.63309352518 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462514506705 0.391690518653 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134813963684 0.123202303941 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0737496438218 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542022314027 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198080935829 0.149214159877 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185331507028 0.161403998019 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149665991444 0.0892212321368 168% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.597867491679 0.385218514788 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0661528616364 0.0692045440612 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.356478638872 0.275328986314 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1047546698 0.0653680567796 160% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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