Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Crimes committed by minors have significantly grown in numbers in a lot of metropolitan areas around the globe. This essay will discuss the reasons and provide the possible solutions to tackle this problem.
Youth crimes are increasing everywhere and this became a growing concern around the globe. There are several reasons for this, but I believe that the foremost reason for the increasing youth criminal rate is the poverty. The increasing number of poverty is increasing in many parts of the world, which affect many households’ daily living. This can be seen from the US statistics where it showed about the expansion of income gaps in last few decades. This inevitably means that those who are poorer will have to resort illegal actions in order to possess of what others have. As a result, the poverty appears to be the one of the vital reason that contributes to increase the youth criminal rates.
Since the youth crimes are increasing rapidly around the world, it is becoming important to solve this issue. There are two possible solutions to tackle this issue. The first solution is to impose of stricter and stronger punishment to minor criminals. Even though the reasons are outside factors that lead to crimes, it is still important to have severe punishments by showing them as an example to other criminals. Also, the second way of dealing with this typical issue is to punish those young criminals’ parents for lacking of their roles to control their children. Parents have to take more responsibility for their children commit crimes. With all these measure, the youth crimes will be solved but currently way of courts are too lenient. Therefore, this solution hopefully prevents further committing crimes by young criminals and deter other youth from tempting of offending because the punishments are strict.
In conclusion, several factors have led up to increase in youth crime, but the stronger punishments are available to tackle this issue.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233146067416 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.182584269663 0.155533422707 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10393258427 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0308988764045 0.0501214627716 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0224719101124 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112359550562 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0505617977528 0.0403226058552 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66452874006 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0477528089888 0.0326793684256 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00280898876404 0.00163938923432 171% => OK
Determiners: 0.115168539326 0.0861772015684 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0112359550562 0.021408717616 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0168539325843 0.011925033212 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1979.0 1933.35771543 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12693498452 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.405572755418 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284829721362 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173374613003 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108359133127 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66452874006 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532507739938 0.56093040696 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.8118578534 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5631118545 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.411764706 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 47.4829721362 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.67857142857 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447425124113 0.332605444948 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123320840387 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0708293427773 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53454156851 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15802130737 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190466072642 0.134430193775 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881227082237 0.0742795772207 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.405912452482 0.324371583561 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0617844963255 0.0638462369009 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310946139743 0.228012699653 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826732614407 0.058150111329 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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