Nowadays many offenders suffering from health problems such as obesity. what are reasons behind it and how it can be solved.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decade. At present, huge proportion of offenders suffer from health issues which are common among adults such as obesity, weak optical, back pain and so on. Here, this essay account for reasons and some remedies to tackle this worrying concern in early age.
There are multifarious causes behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, having fast food in remote area contribute remarkably for spreading this kind of diseases in the growing age of children. To be specific, fast foods are full of oil and adulteration. Which could be harmful for immune and digestive system. Along with this, people are pampering the lap of technology lead to numerous types of hazards in the modernistic world. For example back pain, weak eyesight, Headache , hearing problems and so on.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. In the Rat race world , people work round the clock for earning money to full fill their mighty aspirations. Thus due to their less attention at home increase the proportion of sickness children. Last but not least, playing indoor game such as Ludo, mobile games, charms and so on not only worthless for physical fitness but also consumed precious time in our hectic schedule.
There are some remedies mentioned below for reducing this problem. Amongst all one major is that, One regular daily exercise not only play significant role to curb these kind of hazard before occurred but also must be fruitful for remain fit and healthy in the pollution full life. In addition to this, changing eating habits and less use of electronic gadgets which release harmful range, contribute remarkably to live far from health issue. Apart from this, giving proper guidance by parents to their children must credit the importance of physically strongest in their mind.
To recapitulate, living healthy in the polluted cities is the need of hour. It is universally acknowledged that “a sound mind delves in the sound body” likewise paying attention for body fitness must creditworthy for becoming sharp mind.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'likewise', 'so', 'thus', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275590551181 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.115485564304 0.155533422707 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125984251969 0.0946595960268 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0551181102362 0.0501214627716 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0183727034121 0.0437548338989 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146981627297 0.122226691241 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0498687664042 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57522630741 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262467191601 0.0326793684256 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0656167979003 0.0861772015684 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010498687664 0.021408717616 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00524934383202 0.011925033212 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2080.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13569321534 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383480825959 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274336283186 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200589970501 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117994100295 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57522630741 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.037074148 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65191740413 0.56093040696 116% => OK
Word variations: 82.2131228879 60.7387585426 135% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8421052632 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2072332138 49.517814964 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.473684211 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.814263465372 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.2757335817 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.5 1.69124875643 148% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128412076806 0.332605444948 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.055104016295 0.102741220458 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0481757736009 0.0668466124924 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461448132167 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143374072197 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463838577504 0.134430193775 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482543216328 0.0742795772207 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.259174071103 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0296956538228 0.0638462369009 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802703908234 0.228012699653 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503116347213 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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