Nowadays every parents wants to their child become a singer or dancer. Some people have view that the artistic skills can be acquired with consistent practising, while other oppose this idea. and says artistic talents are inherent gifts. I believe, artistic skills are in born talents and people who have those skills can improve it by continuous practice.
To begin with, people who says artistic talents can be acquired by learning, have their own reasons to justify their stand. First of all , thy think all children are born with same talents and singing and drawing can be possible to any child who is willing to learn it. For example, many children shinning on stage on these items , although they do not have any close relatives with same talents. Moreover, they believe in a philosophy that, anything is possible , if try hard. For instance, a child recently received a first prize in a singing competition with one year practice .
On the other hand, I believe, artistic talents should get by birth and cannot learn by one if ,he/ she did not have any aptitude in the given area. For example, many of the famous singers now in India are the children of the singers in the past and they perform extremely well than their fellow singers. Secondly, some painter are performing without any proper learning from art schools,may be they do not know about the theory of these artistic forms, still they are performing better than those who learned it from art schools. M.F hussian a well known painter in India did not have any academic backgrounds in painting . However, he was popular than other painter in India that time.
To conclude, i certainly believe, artistic skills are god gift and should get by birth. And it is useless to send children to learn these art form who have no taste in this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36775113973 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.561755894193 94% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5132332339 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25595812326 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081592842516 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432911517476 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152945971774 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369319659239 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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