Some people believe that crime rate can be reduced by giving a long punishment, while others say there are alternate ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Crimes are a curse for every nation. We can analyze per year the crime rates are increasing. To reduce this many of the people suggesting long time sentences for the criminals. However, others against this with their own points. I am explaining my suggestions for both the views.
To begin with, We can see many of prisoner's punishing for a long time. I believe this can cause more problems than before. We can see in prison, there are many criminals with violent actions. A long time prison life will influence most of them to imitate other serious criminals. This can bring more harmful effects to the society than before. Some of the criminals are such guilty actions because of the particular situations in their life. I can give an example, I have witnessed for one action there a child theft bread from a store. this was because he couldn't survive hunger. later he caught by police and may take him to jail. Such cases can we avoided with some counseling or advice. Instead of these if we put him in jail, there is a good chance of becoming a notorious criminal. Such situations increase the number of criminals for future.
On the other hand, For such cruel actions as Murder, rape, we must give a long time prison sentences because convicts having very fewer chances of becoming normal later. Even though, in my opinion, we should monitor them and their action to analyze them for the later life.
To Sum up, In my opinion, the government should bring some systems to analyze the criminals and crimes. based on that we can send them for long imprisonment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67391304348 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39308234296 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6248654522 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4285714286 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17312865605 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053537477373 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397054340796 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115062045666 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523094007407 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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