You read an advertisement from local newspaper about a discount sale at a particular shop. However, when you went to buy the goods you wanted, you found the sale had ended.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express the inconvenience caused because of your newspaper. As I follow your newspaper on a daily basis, I came across a Sale advertisement in BigBazaar, Shalimarbagh, Delhi from 2 January to 10 January 2017. Therefore, I visited this place on 9 January 2017 to buy groceries and a Sony Television.
After picking up groceries and selecting my desired Sony Television model, I was expecting a flat 50% discount on the entire bill. But to my disappointment, this was not the case. The manager at the billing counter told me that sale had already ended on 5 Jan 2017 and it was a misprinting by your newspaper. I was really shocked and annoyed. He also said that they have encountered several such cases for the past few days. To avoid any insult, I paid for the complete bill, though I did not have the budget to purchase such an expensive television, otherwise.
I strongly hold your newspaper responsible for this incident and demand a compensation doe the television that I have bought. Otherwise, I will have to file an official complaint in the nearby Police Station.
I am looking forward for your positive and prompt response.
Your Sincerely,
Manpreet Walia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asis, I came across a Sale advertisement in BigBazaar, Shalimarbagh, Delhi from 2...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat sale had already ended on 5 Jan 2017 and it was a misprinting by your newspap...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91787439614 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97174100539 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647342995169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8357183241 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3076923077 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752817847936 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232780871162 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322377678731 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394501852917 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027154557864 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.