In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
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Essay evaluation report
In modern society
In a modern society
people from different backgrounds will offered the same opportunity to compete in society.
people from different backgrounds will be offered by the same opportunity to compete in societies.
it is essential to taking effective actions
it is essential to take effective actions
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 330 350
No. of Characters: 1759 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.262 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.33 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.966 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.203 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.812 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.294 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.499 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.04 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'take'?
Suggestion: take
... On the other hand, it is essential to taking effective actions to reverse the situat...
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Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'offer'
Suggestion: offer
... people from different backgrounds will offered the same opportunity to compete in soci...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...same opportunity to compete in society. In summary, the increasing number of cri...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49393939394 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0914868741 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3639543358 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150553591864 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478307339328 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606423403541 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887794306519 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292774362115 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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