In many big cities in the world, the quality of life is decreasing. What are the causes and solutions for this?
There are some factors that explain why the living standard of city dwellers is reducing. Personally, I believe that this can be handled by adopting a number of solutions, as will now be presented.
Firstly, the air in urban areas is contaminated heavily. The rapid development of industrial activities and the dramatic increase in the volume of vehicles on the roads are associated with the rise in exhaust fume and gas emissions released into the environment. This leads to an increase in the number of people having severe health problems. For example, the poor air quality in big cities like Hanoi and Beijing has been a main cause of some incurable diseases related to respiratory system such as lung and throat cancers that are more common recently.
Secondly, the city life is stressful. Many people have to deal with overloaded work in companies, while they usually experience irritating feeling when getting stuck in traffic congestion. This results in anxiety and depression, holding them back from enjoying their lives.
However, a range of options available can be used to combat the issue. One measure would be that the governments should encourage industrial zones to relocate to the countryside, which contribute to the improvement of the quality of air in urban areas. For example, the authorities in Vietnam recently have offered financial incentive to move factories and plants to rural regions with hope to make the air in Hanoi cleaner. Another remedy is that people should spend more time engaging in physical exercises outdoors and taking part in social activities, helping them to not only improve their general health, but also relieve pressure from the busy life.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to solve the problems caused by the decrease in the life quality in big cities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15488215488 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6901493014 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632996632997 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8222569359 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205911046608 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645473336152 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719518378555 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119641119018 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673629609525 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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