Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is argued that settling in a horizontal city is much more advantageous than a vertical city. Since being raised in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, I personally contend that life in a vertical city offers more advantages due to some following reasons.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for residents when settling in a horizontal city. Firstly, they can spend time on their outdoor activities such as gardening, basketball or a family camping in their own garden without travelling far away their house which is inconvenient and time-consuming. These activities are not only beneficial for both physical and mental health, but also effective ways to nurture love and harmony among family members. Secondly, living in a spreading out city with lower building is much safer in case of emergency. Since almost houses are low-rise buildings, inhabitants will find it easier to escape in case there is a fire in their house or their neighbourhood.
On the other hand, I of the opinion that life in a vertical building is the best due to its convenience and security. Since almost facilities such as supermarkets, malls, movie theaters, which offer the fundamental prerequisites are all in a building, dwellers can pursue any goods or services within walking distance. As a result, they can save time to take up new hobbies or participate in their favourite activities. Besides, security in a high-rising complex is always tight thanks to dozens of officers and security guards who are hired to watch the building carefully day and night. Therefore, the inhabitants can avoid unwanted situations such as thieves in their houses.
In conclusion, though it is advantageous to settle in a spreading out city, it seems to me that living in a vertical city is the best choice.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05102040816 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96521591753 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3653433869 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14815283062 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593381730987 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675911216384 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109426364285 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568419109272 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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