When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argued that the money is the key factor when people choose a job. While this might be true for many workers, I believe that others have different reasons for the choice of their career.
On the one hand, I agree that the money is necessary for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care and education. Most people consider it a priority to earn a salary that can cover their demands and allow them to have a reasonable quality of life. If someone choose their jobs based on enjoyments or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for example, are the ones who do the jobs that they love, but these professions do not always provide them enough money to live comfortably or raise a family.
On the other hand, I believe that other considerations are just as important as the money people can earn. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in the workplace are extremely important when choosing a career. A generous manager and friendly colleagues, for example, can make huge differences to employees' levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many workers' feelings of job satisfaction come from the professional achievements, the skills they learn, the position they reach, rather than how much money they earn. Finally, some people decide on their career path because they want to do something to help others in need and contribute to the society.
Finally, while salaries can affect people 's choice of professions, I do not believe that the money can outweight other motivations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
... reasonable quality of life. If someone choose their jobs based on enjoyments or other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70096484429 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1448181148 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137510804887 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558713656569 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458678109204 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882320583831 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170663482014 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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