In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In less developed countries, children living in rural areas are in lack of access to education. While some individuals argue that an effective solution towards this problem is constructing more schools and hiring more teachers, others believe that there will be an alternative solution such as supplying computers and Internet access. I personally agree with the former due to some following arguments.
On the one hand, it is beneficial to provide children in disadvantaged communities computers and Internet access. The first reason is that these advanced technology helps students a lot in their studying. For example, they can find a wide range of scientific documents in a matter of a click mouse instead of going to their school library which is time-consuming. Additionally, by reading and researching thousands of useful videos and documents on the Internet on their own, they can nurture their self-study habit which is extremely beneficial for their future career. Besides, as a matter of poverty and poor infrastructure conditions such as roads, their parents now care much about the way to make ends meet instead of improving their study. Therefore, providing computers and internet access is extremely vital.
On the other hand, it is undeniable the pivotal role of schools and teachers when it comes to the education field. Firstly, due to the inappropriate provision of the local authorities, there remains insufficient amount of school and teachers in rural communities. Average, one teacher now has been responsible for taking care of about one hundred students with different range of ages each day, which is hard for them to organize a class effectively. Secondly, teachers play a vital role in teaching children fundamental skills such as literacy and numeracy. Without them, students find it hard to learn by themselves, especially those are in primary school. Some people argue that the internet can help children with these skills, however, I definitely disagree with them since children at tender ages are vulnerable, therefore they need a caring, helpful teacher to teach some in person which computers cannot do.
In conclusion, though supplying computers and internet access is necessary, I personally believe that the ultimate solution is to provide more schools and teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38016528926 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92591812874 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542699724518 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1903850761 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0625 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275243717725 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870597063608 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846641133634 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182682841341 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090891425961 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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