Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is not popular in many places? How can its popularity be increased?
It is universially recognized that riding bike is much more environmentally friendly rather than other modes of transportations. However, people now are less prone to cycle due to some reasons. Therefore, measures are of neccessity to be taken in order increase its popularity.
There are two main explainations leading to the decrease in the amount of people cycling, namely the characteristic of riding bicycle and its users Firstly, travelling by bike is obviously time-consuming compared to other means of transportations such as motorbikes or cars. Especially, in this fast-paced life, people are always busy doing their business or entertaining, therefore commuting by bicyle is not a wise choice. Secondly, people in some places are lazy and independent on cars and motorbikes owning to its comfort and convenience. For example, Hanoian, people living in Hanoi (a northen province of Vietnam) are always travelling either by cars or motorbikes regadless of commuting to work or to school.
Therefore, it is imperative to have initiatives to increase the preference as well as the prominance of cylcing. One recommended solution is that government should raise taxes of importing engine vehicles such as motorbikes or cars, thereby raise the cost of these vehicles which discourages people from purchasing them. At the same time, government introduce bicyle as an alternative and campaign the benefits of cycling to people. As a result, more people will be drawn to ride bike.
In conclusion, it seems to me that time-consuming of riding bike and laziness of people are two reasons explaining why more people temporize cycling. To solve this problem, government should impose suitable measure immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4456928839 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21845559607 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0154929012 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145455434257 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545863768688 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535101312018 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975957212643 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733753913715 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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