Police in some countries like in England don’t carry guns. Some do not approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion?
In view of increasing the crimes in most countries, debate has started whether police should carry the weapons or not. Some people do not advocate this idea as these arms overprotect the police whereas other people believe that presence of such items with police deter the crimes. I believe that police should be fully equipped to handle any kind of situation.
People who believe that carrying guns are not necessary for police have some valid points. First of all, use of arms makes the situation worse in most of the cases and ordinary situation which could have handled in simpler way, got complicated owing to the use of arms, resulted, loss of life and social unrest. For example, recent incidents where police shoot the innocent black people for delinquencies led to nationwide protest over killing. Secondly, carrying guns implicitly deliver the message that not only these are required for being safe but also exhibit the face of society and individuals follow this message and start keeping the small pistols for personal security which raise the incidents in the society. Finally, possessing the weapons gives authority to police to use at their discretion. Especially in U.S, it was found that police used the weapons considering as effective medium to resolve the conflict and other approaches were discarded.
However, increasing violence clearly make the case for police to carry the weapons as criminals have advanced resources and do not hesitate to use in public and in order for police to retaliate in the same way to handle the situation and protect the people. For instance, in African countries, ammunitions are easily available in black market and criminals use it for different kinds of offence. Furthermore, terrorism is on its peak and deadly terrorist attacks are taking place in the world, therefore, police must be equipped and trained to respond emergency situation.
To conclude, certainly it is not good for anyone to have weapons in civilized society but crime related situation has worsened and increasing terrorism add the case for police to carry guns and protect people in the best possible manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14613180516 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56415775021 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547277936963 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6845034238 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.153846154 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237677939138 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991723706011 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720203881984 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161244674325 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578926184651 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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