Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
A glance at neighbors about having certain qualities in the community life brings to a light question that has several times provoked duscussions, that is, whether it is ok to stay selfish or not. Some might contend that people are too busy with their life, thus do not need to fully respect the other people. However, I would like to suggest that people have to think about the other citizens living in the same city, in terms of respectation and responsibility. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed light on on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned firstly is that people have to respect their neighbors. My personal example will well exaplain how respectation is important, especially between people living in a same building. For last several months, I suffered from constant hitting noise coming from the ceiling, and it was obvious that people living in the upstair do not care about it. After a several months of agony, I went upstair and cried out not to make such a noise. However, they reacted me with such a rude attitued, saying that I'm the one whoes problematic because I was being too sensitive. This anecdote made me lose my respectation towards my neighborhood, making me not to say helo in an situation of encounter, nor caring about my noise in the night like before I was used to.
Another point here to be mentioned here is that the sense of responsibility is also a crucial quality that one has to satisfy toward their neightbor. There is a research that shows this point of view. A federal government of life satisfaction US investigated two groups of students on their cost of living, specially focusing on how much money they spend on garbage taxes. The result showed that a group of students who were seperating the types of garbabge in the dorm room spent less money than those who did not. The action of former group initially derived from the idea of redusing the amount of labour posed for cleaners, by sharing some amount of it by themselves. This demonstrates that this kind of responsible behavior not only helps the community workers but also redues the cost of living.
Although the forementioned points cross the mind at the first sight, it does not mean that they are the only one. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. It sould be noted that people who are qualified in terms of cibillized citizen are in much lower risk of getting sick and stay healty for good long time. To be specific, people who are happy with their community people shows lower CRP rate, a rate which is related to the potentiality of getting cancer in the uncertain future time.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I firmly belive that there are certain qualities to be met among close neighbors, and the sense of responsibility and respectation are two prime and crucial reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76693227092 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66819637889 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529880478088 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8815138553 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.952380952 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9047619048 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118411492264 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311616868177 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288397439996 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593941209709 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244986068968 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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