Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.
There is an opinion that an individual cannot help to overcome the climate change, in one site I agree with this statement. This is because a climate change is an global issue, well, we can say that a person can take plastics, coke bottle at the beach. But, nowadays, global climate change is much bigger than that. Although taking rubbish is also a good step to overcome the problem, it cannot be compared with thousand ton melted ice in north pole or million waste oil boring in ocean. We need something more than a person act. We need government help to cure our ocean, air and river.
If we talk climate change, we face big oil corporation, huge mining industry. For example, in my country, Indonesia. There is a leakage caused by a big company PT Lapindo brantas. The tragedy affected mud leak in Sidoarjo, soak some sub districts and make warmer weather than before in Sidoarjo. Thousands people lost their houses. This disaster cannot be solved by an individual, this need Government rule to protect nature and people.
In other hands, We cannot stand and wait government to do something. In the case above, even government in my country cannot solve the problem even only force company to pay fine. But one by one person in Sidoarjo try to force company by doing demonstration and invite an important figure to joint their struggle. This figure try to lobby company leader. This is because both of them are friends. He approached company culturally. By a help of this person some people in Sidoarjo get their houses back.
Well, not all person can be like him. God does not give that charisma to all souls. But lets take a nother example comes from a woman who helped a turtle from a death affected a plastic that clogs it's nose in a beach. Her action was recorded and uploaded on you tube. Millions people watched the video and give charity to turtle conservation near the beach.
From these cases we know that an individual also can take some actions to help our earth from climate issue. We an start by ourselves and hopefully it can influenced people around us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nt. This is because a climate change is an global issue, well, we can say that a p...
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Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...the problem, it cannot be compared with thousand ton melted ice in north pole or million...
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Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...housand ton melted ice in north pole or million waste oil boring in ocean. We need some...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ot give that charisma to all souls. But lets take a nother example comes from a woma...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...o help our earth from climate issue. We an start by ourselves and hopefully it can...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'influence'
Suggestion: influence
...start by ourselves and hopefully it can influenced people around us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70572207084 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40827544703 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572207084469 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0738926533 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4230769231 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1153846154 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206101165747 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497460330888 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509243075405 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116080077252 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529895482614 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.