some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is believed that reading novels and articles helps people develope imagination as well as language abilities more than watching TV does. Personally, I am convinced of that opinion for the following reasons.
Firstly, reading books helps readers enhance their creativity and independent thinking abilities. For instance, when it comes to an image of a splendid architectural construction , there are readers who relate this detail to a building in Western style while others imagine an Eastern complex. In contrast, movie watchers hardly imagine in their own ways since their ideas are shaped by what are shown on screens. It is argued that animations or effects used in movies stimulate creativity, however, they only assist in exaggerating what directors emphasize on. Meanwhile, people can find it easy to think and feel independently details written in books.
Secondly, literatures are effective methods for people to boost their language skills. Indeed, since almost all published novels need to pass carefull editting process which ensuring appropriate contents and well written words, writting skills can be enhanced with ideas from those books. Contradictorily, films have a tendency to contain short conversations or even verbal abuses that had negative impacts on viewers. Therefore, people who are in the habit of reading have capabilities to express their emotions or depict their life more sophisticatedly and effectively than those learning expressions from TV do.
All in all, reading books benefits humans' creativity as well as language skills. Therefore, children should be encouraged to read books from an early age for the sake of their development. Also, they should be allowed to spend no more than two hours on TV since screens potentially do harm to their imagination and communication skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in contrast, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48936170213 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94289653878 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641843971631 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7649007329 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292268824667 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908109090773 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903435404996 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182750666608 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598697909692 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.