The maps show the changes o Shalton village from 1910 to 2010
The two maps give the information about the differences of Shalton village in 1910 and 2010.
It is clear that a great number of houses was built on the right-hand side of Shalton village, while there were many services opened along one side of School Road.
In 1910, only a post office was set up in one side of London Road. Moreover, the central area contained a large house surrounded by some trees while there were a cafe, a house, and a bakery are constructed. After 100 years, 4 houses were erected next to the post office, whereas the big house and tree were flatten to build 5 new houses and a road. In addition, the bakery was replaced with a house to broaden accomodation for residents.
Throughout 100 years, along one side of School Road, the butchers and house were demolished to make room for supermarket, parking, and bank. However, there was a slight difference when only 2 houses were constructed which were opposite to the café on the High Street.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'flattened'.
Suggestion: flattened
...ce, whereas the big house and tree were flatten to build 5 new houses and a road. In ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68604651163 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51404922047 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2689942275 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901162647255 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610170990479 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126879943459 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112638230853 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161980601282 0.0819641961636 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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