People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that immigrants should adapt to the local customs and traditions when they fist come to reside in a new country. I completely agree with this statement.
There will be many difficulities the newcomers have to face if they do not conform to the rules of social behavior off the country where they are living in. Firstly, foreigners can not be intergrate into the new community of that nation. For example, when a entrepreneu lives and run his or her business or start up, they need to pay attention to the business rules of the host country. There are many risks too, not only about the host’s laws but also the way to lur and keep customers. Secondly, newcomers can break the laws just because they do not respect the local behavior. For instance, in some modern country, both residents and foreigners can be punished since liitering in the street or public places, in addition, foreigners will be considered as rude and impolite people.
There are also a lot of benefits for immigrant when they adopt to the customs and trationtioin of the new coutry of the resident. The first one is local individuals will become more friendly and welcoming when they see that foreigners are showing respect for their local way of life. Both local residents and newcomers ca be together to build a strong community and mutual understanding. A good thing iss potential experiences which newcomers witnessed help they intergate quickly into every aspect of the society and avoid isolation. During national holidays or festivals, immigrants feel like that they belong too this places.
In conclusion, I believe that adapt follow host country’s custom and traditions is necessary for all immigrants if they want to be a part of their new community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...unity of that nation. For example, when a entrepreneu lives and run his or her bu...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...lot of benefits for immigrant when they adopt to the customs and trationtioin of the new...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94594594595 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76594710464 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5047868171 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150957791745 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567816916612 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622962975976 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121443360958 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660364003993 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.