You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents.
Write a letter to a councilor. In your letter:
Introduce yourself.
Describe the problem.
Say what you think the council should do about the situation.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about my dissatisfaction with the new rubbish collection measure introduced last week. My name is John and I have been living in the town for 20 years. I work as a pharmacist with ShahdAlshifa pharmacy on the main road.
Let me explain my disagreement with the measure. As per the new regulation, people should put their rubbish in the big containers placed in the center of every neighborhood. I would say that it will be very difficult for people, particularly those who do not own cars to carry their rubbish from the peripherals of the town to these centers and that would discourage many people from depositing their garbage in such containers.
I would suggest that it could be better to put small containers in front of every building block in the neighborhood so people can easily discharge their rubbish into these small containers. Also, this would encourage the residents to keep the town clean by throwing their rubbish and unneeded items into such containers instead of littering around the town.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours Faithfully
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99468085106 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80546155409 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1951846371 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0726581953956 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033858096508 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407323819502 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584176427874 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412159097306 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.