Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this change? Good or bad?
In these days, there is no denying the reality that large shopping malls are growing in numbers and they are replacing small shops in every corner of the world. While many people believe that the change brings about positive impacts to people’s lives, others feel that the opposite is also correct. This essay offers some insights on both the merits and demerits of the development.
Perhaps the greatest benefit people can enjoy from large shopping malls is the convenience they offer. As a matter of fact, people can purchase many products and services at the same location without having to travel from place to place to satisfy their needs. This is especially true when people have become busier and time saving is crucial. Another advantage of shopping malls is that they have better facilities. To give an illustration, people can use a wide range of modern infrastructures such as elevators, escalators and automatic car park, which enhances their shopping experiences.
Nonetheless, like two sides of the same coin, shopping malls also creates many problems. The most obvious negative impact is the disappearance of small local businesses. This is due to the fact that small stores are unable to compete with shopping malls in attracting customers, and thus are gradually forced to close down. As a consequence, people will have to face with unemployment and bankruptcy.
In conclusion, from the analysis above, it is clear that while large shopping malls allow people to enjoy great benefits, they also bring upon a number of drawbacks to others’ lives and the society.
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Suggestion: place to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, nonetheless, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17760617761 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70709516205 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3625148291 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217340347485 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794987710546 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657480340972 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139167330068 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433615210302 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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