Because of advances in science and technology, many inventions have been made. There are different controversial debates about most important advancements among public all around the world. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some of the greatest advances.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the computers and medical improvements as most important developments. First and foremost, due to research expansions in the past 100 years and also examinations in the extent of diseases treatments, scientists have succeeded to control or even overcome many of hard illnesses. For example, discover the cause of cardiovascular diseases, HIV and concerns are some of the medicine advancements.
In addition, I think, computer invention is the biggest achievement for the human. By this appliance, have generated many careers in software, hardware, networking and many other related job opportunities. Computer helped to all technologies in medicine, sport, transportation and many others. A recent research conducted by Tehran University researchers shows that the significant number of facilities in vehicles such as airplanes and trains are connected to computer systems.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments in the importance of developments, my personal sentiment is that improvements in medicine and computer invention are greatest achievements for the human.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79326923077 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26803923422 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5188895651 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.545454545 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231008017738 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794544742578 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547061589375 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125615692076 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029577984522 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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