Working and living abroad helps us to know other cultures well. How far you think working abroad has good or bad impacts on our cultural lives?
The substantial influences of working overseas have sparked a controversy amongst the public around the globe. Although specific argument claims that working abroad improves our cultural living, a group of intellectuals debate otherwise and hold an opponent's view. I am highly inclined to accept that living in other countries has a good impact on our cultural lives. The agenda of this article is to discuss both sides and will lead to a legitimate conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why living overseas is supported. The most remarkable one lies in the fact that changing working conditions might lead to a better wage and a peaceful life. For instance, an outcome of a prominent university's study uncovered that most immigrants find Australia a multicultural and a safe place for living. In addition, it is highly alleged that better living standards are lead to better achievements, prosperous future, and a long healthy life. Hence, it is clear that facing other cultures leads to brighter future.
Contrary to popular belief, there remain drawbacks clouded up the potential influences of taking an overseas occupation, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that dealing with language and cultural barriers is a pivotal issue for many foreign workers. Moreover, it is strongly claimed that working abroad is untourable for individuals over 35 years old. For instance, when I came to Australia, cultural differences and language difficulties hold my cultural live back. Therefore, the importance of the immigrant's age and its detriments which may affect adversely on social and personal cultural could be seen with clarity.
To recapitulate, while there are several opinions on both sides, my sentiment is that benefits of working and living on overseas on our cultural lives give more credence that its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29830508475 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86558796226 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2387768485 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304987369941 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100307020389 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819265390613 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194794275051 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648732030637 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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