TPO34
Both the reading and the lecture discuss the main cause of the sea cows' extinction. The reading implies that such decreasing population results from three hypotheses, while the lecturer remains doubtful of each statement. He further provides three refutations.
First of all, the article mentions it is humans' hunting activity that generates the serious extinction problem. However, the professor strongly contradicts such claim by mentioning the body mass of the sea cows. In fact, the sea cows have been recorded to have a length if nine meters long and a weight of ten tons, thus, one sea cow could satisfy the native Siberian people which only have a quite small population. Therefore, the first theory is thought of unconvincing.
Secondly, ecosystems disturbances are considered to account for the declining quantities of the marine species. Once again, the lecturer seriously disagrees with the claim because if the ecological changes indeed occurred, then other species should also be influenced as well. In contrast, other creatures such as whales are still reported safe and sound at that time. Therefore, ecological changes could not be the exact reason contributing to the extinction.
Last but not least, the fur traders from Europe are thought of as a critical reason responsible for the ecological disaster with respect to a previous record from 1768. Nevertheless, the professor highly casts doubt on such claim since the animal has suffered serious declining problem before the fur traders arrived their habitats. To be more specific, the population of sea cows has decreased for hundreds of years before the eighteenth century when these traders first came to the Bering Island. As a result, the fur traders could not play a key role in devastating the marine creature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 22.412803532 31% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28321678322 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74330280933 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.38869169 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06452816374 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36868760387 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985115121633 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106020916698 0.0662205650399 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194022201122 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884897463852 0.0443174109184 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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