At present the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... actors/actress to sell their products. The behavior's actors / actress usuall...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...s. The behavior's actors / actress usually is followed by people. It has impact that ...
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Line 2, column 482, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ord, although the community do not need this products, when their idol sell it, they...
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Line 2, column 535, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., when their idol sell it, they will buy it. For example, Based on survey in the ...
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Line 2, column 656, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t Powder Cosmetic increased dramatically about 150 % in 3 days. It was happen whe...
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Line 2, column 688, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...atically about 150 % in 3 days. It was happen when Isabella, the famous actress in Ca...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... negative development. It is clear that most of people will be influenced by media. The societ...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...tyle especially children. The teenagers was influenced easier, so the present of ad...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to Indonesian parents in 2010 and 78 % said that their children forced them to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13147410359 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90235195097 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529880478088 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.093236359 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5555555556 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257418166164 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975636691271 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797419645057 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210447418218 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851666876385 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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