It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Getting married before graduating has become a controversial issue among public. Although it is regarded by a considerable number of inhabitants as thoroughly both constructive and positive, others hold different attitudes. I am inclined to profoundly believe that it is quite detrimental as it could create negative aspects for its adherents.
There are several reasons why the marriage during or before compeleting studing is disadvantageous. First and foremost, this issue can be faced the youths with problems by enhancing their financial problems. For instance, if every one who got married recently cannot meet their primary needs, they will have a plothera of confrontations. Furthermore, it is crystal clear that a young man who starts his new life when he is still a university student, do not have an appropriate job. This family are forced to deal with joblessness and without their parental support, they cannot afford the difficulties.
In addition to this information, another significant reason which has some catastrophic effects on the such youngsters' lives is, different personal traits. This event is quite specific in every life and not only does it need responsibilities but also each person should develop his or her interpersonal and managemental skills to enhance the ability to bear with problems. But the point is, studing has its own problems and add the problems of marriage in this time to the previous ones can create terrible situations. Also, the young generations are often not mature before graduation and loads of families believe that they do not fully prepared to get married.
In conclusion, while the marriage in this period of time might have some merits, I strongly believe that its drawbacks outweigh the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... conclusion, while the marriage in this period of time might have some merits, I strongly beli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32974910394 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04038582954 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641577060932 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5191310366 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894696725969 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034937529653 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587746363292 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497588623948 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322431880175 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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