There is certainly a difference in thoughts, ideas and actions between children, their parents and grandparents. Why do these differences exist? Does it cause problems in your community, in your opinion?
The view of life of the older generation distinguishes from the younger generation. This essay will examine the causes of existing differences. From my perspective, this trend does not stimulate any issue in my society.
Firstly, it seems undeniable that nowadays the changeable world has required more demands than in the past, posing additional responsibilities to new members. The changeable world forces youths to overcome these requires, to gain new knowledge, skills , and they should adjust to these day conditions. So youngster character traits, visions are shaped by the surrounding environment and conditions which influence on forming personalities. It is known that the world requirements in the previous decade do not coincide with the modern requirements, thus, perspective older and younger people are being different . Secondly, a great effects on person's vision are exerted by the outside world, social media provide a huge source of information.By watching TV, browsing websites, children and parents broaden their horizons, their build relationships, attitudes by their acquired knowledge, experience. Moreover young people are more active, tending to persist, hence they are more interactive with others, giving rise to information of an around reality. Nevertheless, it is worth remarking grandparents shape own visions related their great experience, skills and it is pointless doing an attempt to change them, their views are not able to be changeable in these ages, they are stubborn compared to young visions. Therefore, youngsters views depend on the surrounding reality and changeable, in comparison to older generation views.
In my society, it is observed that young generation and older generation do not strive to rectify each other, they understand abilities one to another and and tolerate drawbacks , if it is necessary to carry out.
In conclusion, visions of different generation have a great gap, because youngsters can smoothly adapt to new environment, however older generation views are not able to change. In contrast, people in community do not have problem related to different views of generations.
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- some people think that child's success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought them up . do you agree or disagree. 84
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people support the development of factory farming and the science creation of fruits and vegetables in agriculture, but others oppose to these developments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60615384615 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10870379135 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0751919878 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.142857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132269761086 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437833305196 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043386479191 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708994303352 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351126182526 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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