Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?
A person in the morden world depends on money, financial independendence is a purpose of a majority of people. However, the fact is suprised that numerous people have opted the way not accumulating money. This essay will examine the causes of this people's behaviour. From my perspective, this trend reaps both advantages and drawbacks.
Nowadays, compared to two decades ago, the level of inflation exerts the impacts on people's consciousness, resulting in an increase in the demand for approaches increasing own personal capital which will be higher than the lever of inflation.It is worth remarking that unfortunatuly, according to some scientific statistic, a bank investments have not brought income overweighting the level of inflation. Nevertheless, some investions in businesses or purchasing of jewelery bring the desire result. Thereby, instead of saving money , a majority of people prefer some investions. Moreover, another reason is of why people waste their money is advertisements, which increase a propensity for buying on a whim, cause a desire of spending scraped savings. Certenly, in reality, for instance, a great number of people are trying to be in fasion what they see in the avvertising magazines. If the press does not provoke people by advertisements, consumer demand will not achieve the higher outcome like now. Therefore, spending money is considered due to advertisement and inflation, stimulating people waste their earning savings.
There are no doubts that country's economy depend on buying ability of human population, high purchasing power boosts the economical level of the country. For example, it is known, chinese goods are exported in numerous countries. and the level of economic development in China has reached the excellent position these days in comparitson to this level two decades ago. Not accumulating money has disadvantage because a great proportion of eldely retirement people did not deserve advanced pensions and, in this case, they are forced to live in poverty. As a result, consuming more goods exerts a positive effect on the country's economy, but not having savings leads to the poverty for people in old age.
In conclusion, inflation and advertising cause strategy of not scraping money, rising desires to buy productions. Economy of the country becomes higher, if people do not intend to scrape finance. Old generation without savings do not live in worthy conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40789473684 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05379421307 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586842105263 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3417279916 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.157894737 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285509610964 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786841364627 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589550122209 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150037035624 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430936404068 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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