Nowadays age discrimination in any company has become a common trend. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in age discrimination by a number of organisations, be it big or small. There is widespread worry that this will lead to myriad of concerns in employing youngsters. In my opinion this apprehension is warranted and merit serious consideration.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that employers always preferred to employee trained and experienced worker over fresh and young graduates. Not only can young employees unable to take right decision due to insufficient experience unlike their senior counterparts , but the company can also suffer long-run management issues. It is hardly needs mention that all these drawback have a far-reaching impact on the youngsters employment rate.
Another overt facet of this argument is that inexperienced employees need professional and work field training which may lead to huge expense. Besides, these training programs involved cost as well as time which may effect company progress. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of hiring young people.
In view of the arguments outlined above one can conclude that the drawback of age discrimination in any organisation are indeed too dire to ignore.
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One of the most conspicuous
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in age discrimination by a number of organisations, be it big or small. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in employing youngsters. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merit serious consideration.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that employers always choose to hire trained and experienced workers over fresh and young graduates. Not only can young employees find it hard to take right decisions due to insufficient experience, unlike their senior counterparts, but the company can also suffer in the long-run. It hardly needs mention that all these drawback have a far-reaching impact on the youngsters employment rate.
Another overt facet of this argument is that inexperienced employees need professional and work field training which may lead to huge amounts of expense. Besides, these training programs involve cost as well as time which may effect company's progress. Hence, it is apparent why many are against hiring young people.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the drawbacks of age discrimination in any organisation are indeed too dire to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...erience unlike their senior counterparts , but the company can also suffer long-ru...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this drawback' or 'these drawbacks'?
Suggestion: this drawback; these drawbacks
...es. It is hardly needs mention that all these drawback have a far-reaching impact on the young...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...wback have a far-reaching impact on the youngsters employment rate. Another overt facet...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...involved cost as well as time which may effect company progress. Hence, it is apparent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, may, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31188118812 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09015842388 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.191124407 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5454545455 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0830780869886 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269248303967 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433133830539 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565577474377 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396889001052 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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