Today the elderly people represent a larger proportion of the population than before. What do you think are the impacts of this trend on our future?
With the advancement of the technology and science, the average life expectancy is getting increased. People live more life as they used to live in the past. Some countries issue the rule of one child to control the population. The high proportion of old people have some positive and negative impacts.
To begin with, old people are the crucial part of the society. They have the knowledge and some experiences which they gained from their life. This information is extremely fruitful for the new generation. For instance, an old age educated teacher has a better method of teaching as compared to new one. Secondly, young members of the family are living a hectic life. Old people take care of their children at home. They do not need to leave their children on crutches. With the help of them, children can spend their time at home environment.
However, on the other hand, as every coin has flip sides, so as this matter has some diametrically opposite views. There are other schools of thoughts who think managing the old people at home is very difficult especially in case of poverty. Old people need proper attention and care from family and relatives. Without finance, it is tough to handle them and cover all the expenses.
To put it into the nutshell, as I have established my viewpoints. Old people provide an abundance of benefits to the society whereas to contrast to this sometimes we cannot give them proper care which hurt them.
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| 2018-07-10 | Davi kaur | 77 | view |
| 2018-01-22 | Sneh Kakkar | 64 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83935742972 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56101492357 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0872231155 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9444444444 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880280423582 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281092187681 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273978857662 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055790710681 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101015069822 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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