In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Elder people in Britain prefer to spend their retirement life in old age home as there are specialized nurses to take care of them. They were able to mingle with similarly aged people and share their life experience. The Government provides monetary assistance to run these social organizations. In my opinion, the government should continue to provide all the necessary assistance to these homes and should not expect monetary support from the families of the elder people.
In the modern world, the concept of joint family is diminishing and we are living a nuclear life. Everyone in the family is either occupied with work or pursing education. This leaves the elder people to stay alone at home which creates a loneliness environment around them. When they need of any assistance, there will no one around them to suffice their requirements. For Example, during the recent flood, 70 years coupled got locked into their apartments and were unable to move to a safer location for survival. With the help of fire department, they were rescued after two days in a critical condition for life.
Given the existing situation, it is difficult to hire a caretaker for managing the elder people in every resident. Moreover, these elder people were contributed to the nation directly by serving in the government sector, armed forces or indirectly supported the government by paying their taxes during their earning tenure. Hence it is the responsibility of government to take of their citizens especially during their retirement period.
I would like to conclude that the old home ages will continue to grow strong and make many elder people happy during the last leg of their life if the Government provides necessary support especially monetary benefit to run these social organizations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Elder) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
Elder people in Britain prefer to spend their retire...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...heir taxes during their earning tenure. Hence it is the responsibility of government ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15068493151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72665546561 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5292398679 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256115900021 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851962500466 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393089255531 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147223182154 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467195969068 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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