These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the best inventions of last century. While it is possible to claim that computers harm many people, my view is that advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why computers are crucial for humans. One of them is that without them people could not work so fast and productive. It can also be argued that computer systems allow individuals to communicate with each other with the help of internet. It should also be taken into account that even cars and buses are safer now due to the innovations in computer technologies.
Those who argue for other inventions such as medicine and against computers have a different view and say that it can actually be a bad thing. Firstly, it is claimed that computer is harmful for humans and can negatively influence the health. Then, there are concerns about the radiation which can be caused by electronic devices such as computers.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that computer is the most paramount invention of the last century. I would strongly recommend that the government should spend more money on the development and innovation of the computer technologies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that computer is the most paramount ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95535714286 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70296924318 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0049995001 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.051052591573 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202048617079 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245731671828 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0307965815224 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00924159360487 0.0609392437508 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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