The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual? what measures?
Nowadays, there are many problems in environment, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public.It can be agreed that government should enforce strict laws against people, while on the other hand stands a perspective that people and organization should be responsible for this. This essay will elaborate on various causes and mitigation and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous ways how the environment is getting affected and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that emission of greenhouse gases from air conditioners and industries. As an illustration, there are many industries which are not following proper procedures for pollution control and this adversely affects the environment. Because of that, the place we are living are getting affected.
Approaches to deal with the setbacks originated by industrial wastes and greenhouse gas emission are numerous, and the most effective one is that government should enforce strict laws against industries and should ban the use of greenhouse gases. For instance, many developing nations have already implemented this rules and are effectively following to curb the damage to our environment. Furthermore, individuals should be responsible to avoid use of cheap products which in turn emits greenhouse gases. Thus, our environment can be protected from further damage.
In light of discussion above, it can be concluded that the impact of environment damage is prominent and the way government enforcing law should be well handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...and drawn the attention from the public.It can be agreed that government should en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, thus, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56485355649 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01717451075 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4586641811 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141811711115 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592313377112 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413118669305 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089181677667 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277712696576 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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