The human values like honesty, honour, kindness and trust are indispensable in the valuation of a person;s worth in the past and they are even more important in the present. The social status and material possessions are temporary and play a very brief role in calculating a person's worth. In my opinion it is the human values which earns a person true respect in the society.
The recent time is seeing a tremendous rise in the materialistic mentality of the people. The people are often influenced with the ones who live in giant house, drive fancy cars and own several costly gadgets. It is peculiar to see that these people with expensive material possessions seldom earn respect from the people. If this was not the case, India might not have made people like Anna Hazare and Narendra Modi popular.
The honesty and simplicity of Anna moved the nation to participate in his fight towards corruption. On the other hand, Narendra Modi who lives life of a sage having minimum personal possessions is the Prime Minister of the biggest democracy of the world, India. The two examples are the extremes in support of my opinion.
I wish to conclude my argument by saying that a human is incomplete without values. In my opinion it is still the people like Malala Yosufzai who have more honest respect in comparison to many billionaires of the world. If only material possessions and social status was enough then why most billionaires did charity? People like Larry Page, Mark Zukerberg, Bill Gates and Ratan Tata earned respect from their social contributions rather than their riches. It is human value of care and consideration towards the needy, helpless and poor that not only added the supreme feather in their hats but also filled their hearts with satisfaction. And I think that this satisfaction worth more than any of their expensive material owning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93015873016 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62365923959 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5167868388 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129509286927 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438145478088 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388005690743 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795729133702 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530826250815 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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