In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Last century was marked by numerous inventions that changed the life of mankind. When selecting the most prominent invention of the twentieth century, the leading choices are antibiotics, airplanes and computers. This essay will discuss why computers are the most influential of the three and, therefore, the most important invention of all.
The importance of an invention is closely related to the impact of it in the daily life of humans. By that standard, computers have a profound impact in making our life easier and productive. During last 100 years, for example, the amount of data handled by computers has multiplied exponentially. This has helped in automation of even the most complex jobs such as satellite navigation and medical surgery. All of this progress in our society can be attributed to the invention of computers that happened many years back.
Despite the evident achievements in information technology, some people think that invention of the computer was not prominent as that of life-saving antibiotics. They don’t understand that even for manufacturing antibiotics, the intervention of computers is needed. For example, artificially intelligent computers control the quality assurance of antibiotic drug manufacturing process. At the current situation, it is clear that computers have superseded all other machines in terms of application and significance.
Science and technology have advanced at an exponential rate over past 100 years which gave rise to the introduction of various innovative machines like biological drugs, the airline industry and information technology. In my opinion, computers are, undoubtedly, the most significant invention occurred in the last century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65891472868 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18929840269 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0580812313 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167943501302 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585838808593 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384639534689 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105803136883 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406754504711 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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