Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations.
Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.
In 5 decades ago, there were limited choices of transportation, it’s not easy to travel from one country to another country. Before existence of commercial flight people traveled by horses, cars or trains which is time consuming and dangerous. As time passed by human had develop transportation which provide more convenient for passengers this is where airplane introduced. Therefore, I totally disagree with the idea that government should tax more to reduce air traffic.
Firstly, airplane give opportunity for traveler who have lowed budget, hence low-cost airlines are playing crucial role for them. The reason behind of saying this opinion is to give a favor for those people who love to travel and explore to see new environments, to learning and gain new experiences.
Secondly, in the event of low-cost airline have to be cut down, it will automatically cut down a choice of transportation too, and people have to switch to use alternative ways of transport such as car or train which are time consuming and not convenience. Additionally, travel long hours there are high chances of accidences due to tiredness during travel.
Thirdly, as I am expat and used to be international student low cost airline is the best option, ideally when low cost airline introduced it really gave me more chances to go back and visit hometown by having this it gave me to spend some quality time with my family and love one.
In conclusion, I am strong say opine that government should not tax more on low cost airline, as it gave us numerous benefits, experiences and love. Without low cost airline we will have less chance to travel, to learn, to gain new experiences and meet our family on festive season.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
... dangerous. As time passed by human had develop transportation which provide more conve...
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Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
... dangerous. As time passed by human had develop transportation which provide more conve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dences due to tiredness during travel. Thirdly, as I am expat and used to be in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83618128685 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3554957486 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208556709963 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824507668597 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666761169933 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112529420881 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478582596978 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.