Some people enjoy extreme sports like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. What are your views on them?
Today, extreme sports are making headlines, sometimes for making world records and on few occasions to create awareness of potential dangers. Banning these sports is strongly disagreed as it will deprive an athlete from freedom of choice and it is also deterring for the economy.
To start with, in today’s liberal era, a person has the freedom to choose their choice of sports or recreational activities. For instance, smoking and drinking are the major causes of deaths and yet they are not banned. On the contrary, sports like skiing and rafting cause very few casualties. When looking at this example it is clear that depriving these players of their passion is unfair.
Moreover, these sports attract many spectators from around the world who contribute to the economy as it is a booming niche industry. For example, mountain biking championships in New Zealand attracts many tourists, which create an influx of international currency for the economy. This exemplifies that the government should promote such sports and clearly outline the safety guidelines for the participants. All in all, banning is not the solution.
After analysing these examples, it can be concluded that such sports should be encouraged with proper facilities and safety measures instead of imposing a ban on them. It has now been shown that banning extreme sports will deprive athletes and economy of their respective benefits. So, it is highly recommended to encourage these sports with financial and infrastructural assistance.
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Suggestion: recommended encouraging
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Suggestion:
...ial and infrastructural assistance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3875 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82754003312 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6061307627 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113578707828 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406749706529 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372420488526 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712472780242 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030212669586 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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