Some developing countries invite large multinational companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy. However, others feel that foreign companies should be shut out and instead the government should help the local companies to contribute to the economic growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some experts are the view of that the Multi-National Companies(MNC) promote growth and trade to the hosting company. There is a certain percentage of people believe that the government does not promote MNCs and help local companies. This essay will disagree with this view and support the upside because they are the influx of foreign currency. Here I will reveal some points that support the importance of MNCs in a country.
MNCs are working in different countries around the world. They bring up with latest and advanced technology to the hosting country which results in development. They train their employees with sophisticated technology that needed run their machines and creates the different class of employment based on the skills of employees. The companies create huge job opportunities for the country that may cause less unemployment. MNCs are the influx of foreign currency and they bring lots of investments to the developing countries. They also make a competition in local rivals thereby increasing the quality of such products. For example, with the arrival of Samsung and LG, the Indian company Videocon increases its quality of production.
Another point is that MNCs promote local business and raise the standard of living of the local people. For example, with the arrival of Techno park in Trivandrum upgrade peoples' lifestyle and expansion of local business. The multinational companies provide better payment than local companies. It also provides a special concession for women employees in a difficult situation such as maternity period. Some companies offer work from home package for women workers which is very convenient to them.
MNCs have many cons but their pros outweigh to their cons. The government must promote MNCs for the social and economic welfare of our country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...al of Techno park in Trivandrum upgrade peoples lifestyle and expansion of local busine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32291666667 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73954372595 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4250554418 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167588556223 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527873717348 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413012051562 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928582777156 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279665749957 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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