It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Write between 200 and 300 words.
There is a trend that teenagers nowadays would like to take a break before going to university after their 12th grade. While some people think that the year off is necessary, some argue that it is a waste of time. This essay will discuss why teenagers should go to university after graduated from high school.
Teenagers like to think that after 12 years of schooling, they deserved a break for their life. The truth is, while they are enjoying a year off, some of their friends had pursued the university study and will graduate earlier than them. Just imagined when you are struggling for your thesis, your friend has found a job and start earning money for their life. Hence, the decision of having a year off is not advisable.
However, taking a year off has the advantage too. Some people argued that while having a year off, they are able to pursue their dream such as traveled to a lot of places and gain their life experience. For example, Lily has become a volunteer during her time break to help clean dirty beaches or helping old folk. It is agreeable that some people had fully utilized their year off.
in a nutshell, this essay discussed about a year off is waste of time unless you got dream to pursue by that time. In my opinion, I completely agreed that having a year off is waste of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...e had fully utilized their year off. in a nutshell, this essay discussed about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23549945351 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9599337973 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329535103422 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148982520986 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107360499082 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225553982437 0.151781067708 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558612886432 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 12.6369458128 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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