Some people say that to solve today global problem every nation should have a good relationship with other nation to what extent do you agree or disagree with statements .
In this modern era of globalization ,nation play an important role in the world . Every nation should have a better relationship with others country . Although,others have reflecting views every nation has to solved these problems on its own .I completely agree with the point of view ,it's not possible without the help of other countries.
To start with ,the presence of good relationship among different countries is relastic to control the global problems and terrorism .which are having deterring effect on our country for example -Every nation should take strict steps about terrorism all aro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44378698225 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8927095594 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668639053254 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4925921861 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34967264393 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154228384691 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124663910899 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167420118869 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126488337764 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.