The Users Of Social Media, Such As Facebook, Twitter, Are Replacing Face-To-Face Contact In This Century. Do You Think The Advantages Of This Way Outweigh The Disadvantages?
In a modern world, the development of technology is rapidly increasing. One of them is the social media such as Facebook, Twitter or Instagram- which is an indispensable means of communication. While I argue that this development has both benefits and drawbacks, I would believe that there are more advantages than disadvantages.
On the one hand, using social network has negative impacts on people around the world. Firstly, people tend to contact each other less than before in the daily life. For example, with the development of technology, each people possess their own smartphone. Therefore, they always keep their eyes glued to their mobile phone, instead of talking in person. The second advantage is that most of the people, especially, young people are becoming dependent on the excessive virtual social network. This leads to they tend to ignore real life
On the other hand, I argue that there are much more benefits than drawbacks. The first benefit is that people can connect and communicate each other more easily, especially with those people who live far away. Because they can exchange information, make phone calls or keep in touch with others through Facebook with text messaging and calling functions. For example, I have a best friend who has been studying in abroad, I can know what she is up to through status which she wrote. Secondly, it helps a person to be able to make many new friends around the globe. As a result, he or she can expand his or her social relationships, making life more interesting.
In conclusion, although it has some negative effects, I firmly believe that the appearance of social networking sites brings many positive impacts on our life.
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| 2019-07-01 | linhhhoang | 89 | view |
| 2018-04-01 | kookiiejeon | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01063829787 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73211014304 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5341708411 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100647880102 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348924621578 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447437344404 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703394699991 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597129407685 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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