Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The report summaries the reason for decrease of the population of Arctic deer live on Island in Canada's arctic regions. The deer cross the frozen sea and migrate for their food to another land. The given argument is based on local hunters report and the global warming report coincide that the sea ice melt and deer couldn't migrate for food and the population declined. There are other reasons may be possible for the declining of deer. The local hunter's report have not any statistical data which validate the author's point as well as the global warming report is also not present and solid reasons for the report.
Furthermore, the deer population became less than previous years according to local hunter's report but they didn't present the rate of hunting did previously and now. The Arctic deer is one of the costly and demanded animals in the market to make antiques. For personal benefits hunters illegally hunt the animals and gain fulsome profit. It may be one of the reasons for extinction of deer from Canada's region.
Moreover, the local hunters live in that region and they depend on forest for living. Natural habitats of deer usurp by the human and they continue interference the deer's life. This is also one of the main reasons for the changes in deer's population. For example in India the population grows rapidly and the forest area takeover by human due to which so many unique animals extinct from India.
Additionally, the global warming report put fact that the sea ice getting melt. The effect of global warming is not quick phenomena, it is gradual process. Today we all experience effect of global warming and we all adapt the changes in the environment. As well as the deer's also adjusted with the local food and found survival in the same reason. The quickly jumped on conclusion the changes in climatic conditions rise difficulty for deer to cope up is not valid reason for decline population of deer.
Conclusively, the argument is denounced due to the lack of evidences. The author should have supported it with more statistical data.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1690 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.761 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.391 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.472 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.533 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...migrate for their food to another land. The given argument is based on local hunter...
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Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...coincide that the sea ice melt and deer couldnt migrate for food and the population dec...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ording to local hunters report but they didnt present the rate of hunting did previou...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'deers'' or 'deer's'?
Suggestion: deers'; deer's
...uman and they continue interference the deers life. This is also one of the main reas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 353.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88668555241 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44165356068 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478753541076 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9130584364 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223250123815 0.218282227539 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725165310105 0.0743258471296 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645368169889 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112957450788 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670120640795 0.0628817314937 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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