Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The statement presents how is the cycle of the Canadian arctic deer during the annual seasons. Their main source of food are plants which need some high temperature to germinate and, in the other hand, the deers also need lower temperatures in order to move<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="to "></span> from island to island using the ocean’s frozen parts. Meanwhile, local hunters reported that the population of arctic deers are decreasing and these reports coincide with recent global warming trends indicating that the polar ice cap is melting. Although this seems logical, there are lack of important information to relate the declining of the deer’s population to the global warming event.
In the first place, the exert indicates that the declining in the number of deers are reported by local hunters. Therefore, it is possible to verify that this observation is purely visual and there is not any scientific research to indicate empirical numbers of this decrease. Another important fact is that these locals are not able to inform if the animals are really dying from starvation or if they are just migrating to other areas due to the temperature increase or other unknown reasons.
Moreover, to connect the fact that these hypothetical decrease is connected with recent global warming only because they are observed at the same time is very frivolous. The global warming, as its name shows, an event on a global scale. The text also don’t idicates any concrete data concerning the melt of ice in Canadian’s islands. Also, recent studies indicates that this event is not totally proved, so it cannot be taken as a true event that is happening equally all over the world.
Lastly, the statement also doesn’t shows information about other animals in the area. It is known that even with the difficult winter in Canada’s arctic regions, there are a rich wildlife, like polar bear, fox, musk, seals and many others. So, only looking for a specific animal is not sufficient to give good conclusions.
In summary, the argument presented by the text have just a superficial approach of the problem. There is no scientifical evidence just reports by the locals focused in theirs everyday observations. Thus, the reason applied to population’s decline is based only in a coincidence of events, which there is not sufficient data of the temperature or rate of melting in Canada’s islands. Finally, there has not been evaluated the deer’s migration to another area or the behavior of other animals. Showing that the argument needs a lot of additional information in order to be plausible.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 431 350
No. of Characters: 2107 1500
No. of Different Words: 229 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.556 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.889 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.62 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.684 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.547 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.632 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.278 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.52 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.033 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...bal warming event. In the first place, the exert indicates that the declining in the num...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, while, in summary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 426.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2441314554 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20517707581 2.78398813304 115% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 204.123752495 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 705.55239521 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1861117058 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.578947368 119.503703932 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.70786347227 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161612265826 0.218282227539 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413709473919 0.0743258471296 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378135956993 0.0701772020484 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818155019053 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543544673794 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.3799401198 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 98.500998004 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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