The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Young people are the backbone of the development of country, the energy and enthusiasm brought by young people in government, industry and other related fields constitutes a pillar for the nation's progress. I'm in great extent consonant with the given topic that the best way of preparing young people for leadership in government, industry and other field is by instilling them sense of cooperation rather than competition. I'm going to support my side with two main reasons.
To begin, With the sense of competition people tend to depart from their main course of leadership, and get more predilection with what adds up benefit to them in competition. For instance, In Nepal, there are growing number of educational instutute and their major concern has been to get ahead in competition rather than cooperating together to ameliorate the quality of education in the country. Moreover, as a consequences the quantity of institute are in rapid growth rather than quality. Thus, Leadership in industry with cooperation between young people helps the growth of society and nation as a whole.
Furthermore, In government leadership, the sense of cooperation is necessary than the sense of competition between the political party. This could forestall the progress in development activities. If young people cooperate with each other and work for the common goal of development then, the work is carried out more effectively. For example, In small village of Nepal, Baage, young people instread of carrying out organic farming by themself, they started a small farmer community which includes all the fields of those young people. With the cooperation, they are not only being benefited but, it is also easy for them to get investment and funding from governmental and non-governmental organizations. Therefore, the cooperation played a pivotal role on these young farmer in the growth of their society in farming which couldn't have been done by sense of competition between them.
Admittedly, Competition is necessary for the new innovation and development in the society. For example, the competition between two IT companies could urge companies to innovate new product in the market or provide better service at affordable price to general people. However, if the competition augment at high rate than the quality of work degrades rapidly. Competition is crucial for the innovation but, it doesn't necessarily helps the society in a long run.
In conclusion, Society need to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields by instilling sense of cooperation in them. The sense of competition subsumes some benefits to the society but doesn't necessarily be beneficial in long term. so, cooperation in young people would definitely buttress the growth of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33634311512 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99550829184 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465011286682 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7053914017 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.15 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445778301484 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137137655815 0.0831039109588 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153628121358 0.0758088955206 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278260652855 0.150359130593 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139782581238 0.0667264976115 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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