The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
While I disagree with the claim that the best way for society to prepare its young people for
leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition, it is necessary to weigh its pros and cons. We also need to analyze some of the questions like what are the qualities of a leader and how a leader is made.
A leader is someone who stands for its group, who works for the betterment of the group and who represents that group. So firstly, a sense of cooperation is important in a leader. He should be attentive and understand the problems of its group and should be able to work towards it. He should work as a responsible person and help in finding ways to solve the problems.
Secondly, when there are many leaders in a community fighting for a cause, each leader should be able to compete with another in order to gain support for its group. For example, when are different industrial
leaders fighting for a single client, each of them should be able to represent its company and demonstrate its capabilities to acquire that client.
Also, the client will be happy to spend money on an industry whose leader is smart and has all required qualities. A person acquires knowledge through competition and can use it in his development and so a leader can.
When India was fighting for independence there were 2 major personalities that we Indians praise until now- Gandhiji and Bhagat Singh. Gandhiji is called a father of the nation and Bhagat Singh was a great leader.
Both fought for their country in different ways. Though both co-operated towards their country, Singh was able to compete
with the English men and hence is known as the leader.
Hence, in my opinion, to prepare young people for leadership in any field, competition and cooperation both are important. A leader needs to have all the qualities that can make him a true leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77203647416 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65807165531 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516717325228 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3455448016 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307717686471 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100720600121 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148990239433 0.0758088955206 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135302694543 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125003507648 0.0667264976115 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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