The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

The topic raises the controversial issue of whether cooperative cuilture is better that competitive culture in preparing the young people of a society. Indisputably, competition brings the best of individuals. Nevertheless, it needs more of a collective approach than an individual to help the society grow.

First of all, the collection of young people of the society comprised of strong as well as weak people, in the sense of their merit. So a culture of competition will never help the weak ones to perform equally like the strong ones. I would like to point out that when a society progresses, it is actually the result of collective effort of all the parts of the socity including strong and weak youngsters. To illustrate, let us look at the example of a society where only 10 very meritorious young individuals are present. In this circumstance, obviously they can help the society by becoming leaders or important figures. Consequently, it is obvious that if they had helped others and produced 50 more individuals like them, that society would have been much more benefited.

Furthermore, a sense of cooperatiop helps to grow morality. The feeling of rising togrther and falling together. Specifically, young people grow the virtue of leaders when the build a relation of cooperation between themselves. They tend to think about the whole collection of them rather than selfishly thinking about only ownself. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that instilling coopearion of youngs greratly helps the socirty to grow and flourish. Hence, society should not encourage competition, rather they should teach cooperation.

Admittedly, competition also have some significant advantages in growing strong young people. Cooperation may be good for learning, but it is competition that helps to create mental stength. This is true specially when there is a need to distinguish whom to select as a leader. In addition, it helps to

However, this claim does not provided a sufficient support to the argument that competition will eventually bring greater good for the society. Because, it will only separate the strong ones from the weak ones.

In conclusion, although there are some merits of competitive approach, a cooperative approach will be much more effective. As long as some measurements are performed and some areas are involved, this claim will be held true.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28645833333 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98927480986 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533854166667 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9741333302 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2727272727 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68181818182 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118911238774 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353773217666 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291369863864 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580255139114 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351586379148 0.0667264976115 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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