If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement
and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position,
you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how
these considerations shape your position.
Undoubtedly, human nature always wants to realize the desires with the help of any possible factor, and on this harsh way it demands an amalgamation of different beneficial methods. However, it is always essential to opt the goals wisely, in order to be successful in our life span. This is outright that we may make serious mistakes , and these might be entirely deleterious , so I am not totally in favor of the mentioned attitude, and I am going to deal with the reasons.
First of all, it is transparent that some of the wishes and goals are not really commensurate with our life situation. In the other words, some of us are not usually humble with ourselves which is obviously a detrimental feature, as it can bring about innumerable consequences for both society and individual. Candid way of cogitation could be salutary for the people .Not only it helps to map the future in a more accurate way, but also it might trigger our life style to be more disciplined. This can make a good contribution to efface some of the unfounded decisions that at first glance they might be seen reasonable , but we do not usually consider the impacts in a long run.
Another reason is that , it is mandatory to always consider the moral outcomes of our enterprises. If the result of our performance for achieving to success, and euphoria vitiate the others, this can diminish the value of the all efforts that have been made in a long process. Thus, it is vital to be always prudent regarding the procedures which we want to utilize them. The famous example about this issue is the fraud activities and depravities that usually occur in many of the states whether developed or under developing countries. These people resign themselves not to consider their counterparts , and set aside distinctive goals which are totally assorted with the moral beliefs.
However, it is always recommended to get adequate advice from well-informed people, since their experiences could renovate the way which we think regarding our goals, and we can choose much better goals for the future, in addition to maintain our social cachet in the society by not carrying out every unsuitable work.
Briefly, this is a demanding job to always be realistic about the possible happenings although pessimism can not be a proper way of solving the problems. That would be much better to set logical goals, and if the outcome was satisfactory, we can keep on altering them in a way which can lead to success .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tright that we may make serious mistakes , and these might be entirely deleterious...
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... them in a way which can lead to success .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, thus, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83254716981 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76285431765 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535377358491 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1979949497 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2666666667 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943231751844 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366533385115 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229727654366 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560120029651 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243580163151 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.