A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
education is important nowadays for students to know how the actual world works ,
how definite things occur . it's all about communication skills , logisitics , analytics , research and overall development . The basics should be same in every part on nation so that citizens are provided with same curriculum wherever they go. Some complications might occur to students if national curriculum is not provided to everry school .
Firstly , if the national curriculum is studied nationwide then the basics would be same everywhere . Keeping the same national curriculum till school level will surely bring out uniformity in the education system and the pattern of grading, schooling and evaluation will be the same throughout. uniformity and equality for all would be ensured in this case . The students who migrate from rural to urban areas might have less problems andwouldn not have to start over . For example , if a parents job is transfered to another location and the whole family has to migrate to another place , it would be easy to change school midway rather than to study the same course once again .
Secondly , The students nationwide would be on the same page of the book . every student will be equal . On contrary to that , let's take an example Say there are two different states each having their own different curriculum . First one has high level of maths and low level of english while the other has low level of maths and high level of english . When they are admitted to colleges , their perspective to answer the questions would be different to same questions . As they don't have the basics same , it would be difficult for them to cope with the studies .
having the basics same nationwide creates equal opportunities in rural as well as urban areas . it can contribute to growth and economic development of overall nation.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08609271523 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.676031448 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8382947379 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3529411765 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 7.80617977528 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276142322839 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948785997925 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745094110317 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151561195451 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937968760047 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.