A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
One of the main tasks of a country to provide their young generations with an education system. Sometimes it is recommended that a country should implement the same curriculum until college for all of its citizens. This may seem easier for any country since there will be no need to differentiate the subjects students will learn and to open up separate schools with different curricula. However, from my point of view, this may be harmful in the end since each student have interest in different subjects, they all have different abilities and lastly this may result in a lack of creativity among students.
First of all, not all students are interested in the same subjects. Some students like to think about abstract mathematical problems whereas others may prefer to enrich their knowledge about history. For example, if a nation uses a curriculum without any physical education courses, many students who has interest in sports such as basketball cannot find a chance to develop their abilities in that field until college and after the high school, it may be too late for them.
Furthermore, the second vital point that should be taken into account is that people have different abilities and not everyone is gifted in the same field. A person who will become a carpenter, would have to take same courses with everyone else in the country if one curriculum for all is adopted. Thus, if this person takes a course in which he is not very successful at, this may result in a low self-esteem for that person.
Lastly, while students are educated using a unique curriculum, they may not find a chance to discover the creativity in themselves. Since they only learn the topics from one perspective, they may not be able to create their own ideas and further develop them.
To sum up, the claim that a unique curriculum for all citizens should be adopted for a country may not be valid due to aforementioned reasons. In Maslow's pyramid of hierarchies, the highest step is to realize oneself and in the same curriculum for everyone case, the nation would not permit its citizens to reach this step.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gh school, it may be too late for them. Furthermore, the second vital point that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88333333333 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63939176495 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5230311294 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.571428571 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231051541895 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929736599288 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751795524113 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136074111308 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369669877357 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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